The
wind shrieked menacingly through the gloomy trees’ long tendrils, like a
bellowing king, shouting in fury. Shadows slowly crept up on the terrified,
disorganised boys, like a satanic midnight wolf sneaking up on its unknowing
prey. Sam and James, two thirteen year old boys, had been walking through the
ancient wood for hours, utterly drenched by the harsh rain, from the intense
storm still raging on. That’s when the
old, mountainous trees began to slowly clear out and the panic-stricken, almost
hopeless, boys spotted the colossal silhouette, perched on a rocky hill, like a
pitch black raven perched on a branch…
It was
a crumbling, wooden, dark mansion – the front was lined with large, eerie, oval
windows, completely smothered in dust. Sharp, squat, rusty metal poles stuck
out of the roof, slightly wonky because of the enormous, powerful storm. Old wooden planks protruded in some places,
and parts of it were going green; this place was abandoned and it had been for
a long time.
Yet
inside, it looked a warm, welcoming, jolly old place, almost luring in the two
boys. Although they were slightly apprehensive, Sam and James were so relieved
to find a house, and so desperate to get out of the rain, they barely noticed
that they were slowly trudging towards the front door. They wanted to go
inside. They needed to go inside! So they approached the heavy door, and
heaving it aside, crept in.
As Sam
swiftly lit a candle, which he placed on the floor, James slammed the door shut
behind them.
“Finally,
shelter!” gasped James, breathing heavily as he leant against the huge door. A
long, obvious, white wire connected a tiny switch to a huge old light bulb hanging
just above the next room
The
light slowly flickered on as Sam quickly flicked the switch. The light, even
though dim, illuminated the room, revealing it was swamped with sticky, white
cobwebs. The two poor, innocent boys, looked at each other and slowly gulped –
they had no choice.
Clutching
each other’s shivering shoulders, Sam and James speedily marched to the other
side of the room, only to find a humungous spiral staircase. The entire
staircase was constructed of wood, but over the many years out in the desolate
woods, it had become tired and decrepit. That’s when they heard it.
Terrified,
they listened – a horrifying wail echoed down the stairs. The boys weren’t sure
why (maybe curiosity or a sudden burst of courage) but they both began to walk
up the staircase in eerie unison. A chill ran down both boys’ spines as
another, louder moan echoed down the stairs. Both boys heaved a huge sigh as
they got to the top, as they saw a tiny, tortoiseshell kitten, trapped under a
plank of wood.
“Phew!”
sighed James, lifting the plank off the injured kitten. He sat, calmed, stroking the kitten. But
something else had caught Sam’s attention. An ancient, framed painting was
pinned to the wall in a room ahead of them, of a bearded, Victorian man.
Both
boys now apprehensively crept into the mysterious room – a library! Every wall
was covered in bookcases, and shelves were lined with malevolent busts.
Suddenly,
the door slammed and a screech roared loudly out of the painting. Sam’s own
thoughts flashed before his eyes. This was not a warm, welcoming, jolly old
place! It was a sick, Victorian madhouse! Both boys kicked and slammed at the
door, tears slowly rolling down their faces.
Ten
years later…
“As
you can see, the house is massive!” spoke the estate agent, guiding the wealthy
couple around the house. But he had
spotted something very strange. In the
middle of a wall, in a massive library, sat a painting of a sinister Victorian
man. Also, beside him stood two
modern-looking boys, petrified and weeping.
I was impressed by your excellent language choices! (Mr. Pannell)
ReplyDeleteWhat a sinister picture you build up here Harry! I love your use of similes and the way every paragraph is a mini cliffhanger. Great writing. ( Mrs Neale)
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