It was 8 o’clock - my bedtime. As I changed into my pyjamas, I thought of the wonderful dreams I’d have. I climbed into my warm, comfy bed and closed my eyes.
In the morning, I woke up and found myself in a weird, wonderful world and not in my bed. As I stared around, speechless, I heard small, fluffy birds tweeting and animals eating wobbly jelly and tasty lollipops. I saw people chatting in the long, dry, green grass. It was such a beautiful sight. The hot, burning sun was shining in the bright blue sky, like a star which was as bright as the lightest light bulb in the world!
Slowly, I started to wander towards a very tasty looking lollipop and started to nibble it. It was the best one I had ever tasted. Birds flew down to join me. They started to peck the lollipops and the noisy cows started to drink up jelly from a jelly river. As I wandered further, I started to see lovely gingerbread houses with delicious cream and biscuits for the roofs. Next, I found a whole massive town! The pavement was made of crunchy crisps and the road was made of soft, brown chocolate. I walked quickly along the loud busy street, looking at every gingerbread shop I passed. Everybody waved at me. I felt like I was a famous man marching along a rich street. I could smell sausages and mashed potato from each shop.
One hour later, all the yummy food had been eaten and the sun was setting. In the distance, I could see a shadow which was the shape of a zombie-looking creature! The zombie stared at me and charged in my direction! I was very scared. Every single shop was broken and smashed to pieces. After 5 minutes, I could still see the zombie, about three metres away, running after me. I saw a castle and thought there would be some really good hiding places.
I opened the hard, wooden doors, quickly, and slammed them in the zombies face. I found a dusty, golden key for the door and I locked it as fast as I could. I slept in a bed to get here, so maybe if I sleep in this world I’ll get back, I thought. The locked door crushed down and the zombie marched in. I looked around and saw a shiny iron sword lying next to a wooden shield. I picked them both up quickly and aimed the sword at the zombie. It charged at me and I stabbed him with the sword. Crash! the zombie fell to the floor. A few minutes later, I had explored most of the castle. Then I wandered into the king's bedroom and lots of angry zombies started to chase me. I quickly climbed into the bed and fell fast asleep.
I woke up in my own world. That was an epic adventure, I thought.
I opened the hard, wooden doors, quickly, and slammed them in the zombies face. I found a dusty, golden key for the door and I locked it as fast as I could. I slept in a bed to get here, so maybe if I sleep in this world I’ll get back, I thought. The locked door crushed down and the zombie marched in. I looked around and saw a shiny iron sword lying next to a wooden shield. I picked them both up quickly and aimed the sword at the zombie. It charged at me and I stabbed him with the sword. Crash! the zombie fell to the floor. A few minutes later, I had explored most of the castle. Then I wandered into the king's bedroom and lots of angry zombies started to chase me. I quickly climbed into the bed and fell fast asleep.
I woke up in my own world. That was an epic adventure, I thought.
I really enjoyed reading your description of a fantasy world. I liked the idea of a jelly river. Well done! (Mr Garratt)
ReplyDeleteWow, great writing Billy. Lovely use of adjectives, connectives and time phrases. (Mrs Nichol)
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