Thursday, 18 December 2014

The Snowman's Surprise by Hannah 3SB

To read Hannah's story, click on the first picture and then click each picture to change to the next page.  Once you have read the story, click the cross to come back to this page. Please leave her a comment once you've enjoyed it to let her know your thoughts!









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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous18/12/14 3:14 pm

    This was a fantastic story Hannah, well done. I really loved your alternatives for said! Mrs Blaker x

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  2. Mrs Payne18/12/14 3:20 pm

    Hannah, this is a really lovely story. The pictures and words blew me away! Your handwriting and vocabulary make it look like a much older child wrote this - congratulations!

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  3. Anonymous19/12/14 11:53 am

    Your punctuation was brilliant Hannah, especially the speech marks. Well done ( Jasmine Year 7)

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  4. Anonymous19/12/14 1:35 pm

    I really enjoyed reading your story Hannah. (Mr Garratt)

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  5. Anonymous24/12/14 8:31 am

    A great story with wonderful illustrations - Well done Hannah (Mrs Smith)

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