As I unravelled the old, rough rope, my hand shook. Carefully, I opened the cold, grey, creaky, stone doors. Slowly, I walked down the ancient, dusty corridor and there was another stone door. I opened it...
I walked into the Antechamber and saw Tutankhamen's great throne and paintings of things he owned. There was a statue of Tutankhamen and lots of valuable, golden objects. As I walked further into the Antechamber, I saw a speedy chariot.
When I opened the next stone doorway, I walked into the Annex and saw wine bottles and lots of baskets full of food lying on the ground. There was some gold lying on the ground. I saw one boat and books in random places.
Well done Jayden. I sensed the fear you were trying to show through the line about your hand starting to shake. Great stuff!!
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