A hollow tree stood directly in front of me. There was a small opening at the back of the tree so I cleared away some thick ferns. Hesitantly, I clambered inside. I started exploring cautiously. I climbed on to a branch. I could feel damp as I clambered on to the middle. The tree was gloomy. Sitting there on a tree, suddenly I realised how small I was compared to it. I squeezed in through a dark, twisting, ante-tunnel and slid through the other side. The ferns were covering the entrance like a den. The small bird holes would be a perfect window. It would be perfect for a look-out tower. I went up to the top of the tree to see all the beautiful plants outside clinging to the leaves. I wondered weather the aboriginal children played here 100 million years ago. I went through the secret, rare tunnel and started exploring again. I found a rather rare beetle. It was black with yellow spots. It was extraordinary. Also, I spotted a spider with an unpleasant breath. I went back up to the window.
Sammy S
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What a great piece of descriptive writing. I really like your use of adverbs and short sentence to create effect.
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that kids work is out of this world
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing it felt like I actually there.
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