Thursday 21 May 2015

Vesuvius Eruption by Serena, 3SB

Without warning, Tranio and Livia stepped outside onto the horrifying streets.  They could see plooming ash clouds in the dark sky and forks of lightening were scaring the people away.  Silhouettes of birds were in the sky.  People were clutching onto their loved ones. Pumice was violently raining on them.  They could smell danger.  Curious and worried, they went further into the dusty street.  Sea salt was racing into their mouths.  Tranio could hear Livia's heart beat.  It was pounding like made.  Vesuivius was angry and vicious.  They could hear yelling and the hustle and bustle.  Mothers were looking for their children.  

5 comments:

  1. Thanks Mrs Granger and Mrs Blaker for agreeing this should go on the writers blog ๐Ÿ˜˜

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  2. Thanks Mrs Granger and Mrs Blaker for agreeing this should go on the writers blog ๐Ÿ˜˜

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  3. Jodie Ward27/5/15 8:27 am

    Well done Serena, so proud of you xx

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  4. Well done seesil me winks I love the lightning folks scareing people away love big boss Jodie xxx (I had to write this because my sister didn't know how to do it lol)

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  5. superstar

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