Monday 20 April 2015
The Harbour by Bea, 3SB
One day I was walking on the beach when I came across a harbour. It was gloomy with a green sea and old, ragged fishing boats. The sand was yellow with patches of green algae. It was so windy that the palm trees swayed frantically back and forward. They were so violent, they nearly knocked me over. Behind the big, bushy palms you could just about see lots of little huts. The sea was so green, it looked more like goo than sea. The boats were swinging back and forward, like they were big dogs trying to escape their leads. The boats were all full of fishing nets with holes in them. Nearly everything was old.
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Well done Bea. I can really picture the boats rocking violently in the sea from your comparison of them being like dogs pulling on their leads. Great description. Love from Mummy x
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