Phoebe:
The river is a spy,
It sneak’s around at night,
Like the waves it jumps up high,
Then in the morning the water sees light.
The river is a Ninja,
It defeats you fast,
Something or anything,
If you get caught zoom past!
The river is a car,
Racing by it’s top speed,
It meanders in and out of corners,
It weaves with seaweed.Megan:
The river is a snake
Slivering and wigling,
Moving and fast,
Big and noisey
The river is a shark
Fast and swishy,
Blue and evil,
Thin and sharp teeth
The river is a ninja
Deadly and it always wins
Black and quiet
It moves fast and sneaky
Lovely poems girls - I particularly like the idea of the river as a ninja!
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I love the ryhming its very catchy
ReplyDeletevery good 4jp well done
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