What an incredible effort Zaki, you must be very proud of your work. I like your use of questions at the end of some of the entries. Well done. Mr Pannell
Excellent work Zaki. It's obvious that you have put a great amount of effort and thought into this writing. It seems like your diary was a friend in whom you confided. Pleasure to read - well done.
What an incredible effort Zaki, you must be very proud of your work. I like your use of questions at the end of some of the entries. Well done.
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Excellent work Zaki. It's obvious that you have put a great amount of effort and thought into this writing. It seems like your diary was a friend in whom you confided. Pleasure to read - well done.
ReplyDeleteAmazing writing, Zaki! So lovely to see your progress from when I had you in Y4!
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very detailed and exiting
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ReplyDeletewell done neat writing i wish i could right like this
ReplyDeleteZaki I think you have done a lovely piece of work and you have used a lovely set of adjectives you have also used very descriptive writing.
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