Monday 15 December 2014

Trenches by Joseph (4JP)

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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous17/12/14 11:32 am

    AMAZING work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!How long did it take you?

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  2. Anonymous17/12/14 11:35 am

    well done great use of commers

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  3. Anonymous17/12/14 11:38 am

    really good I hope you get a headteacher award from Nick

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  4. Anonymous17/12/14 11:39 am

    Amazing work Aadi

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  5. Anonymous17/12/14 11:44 am

    amazing work you should be proud of your self have you shone mr garret because if you did not then why not i can not belive that you rote all of this well done

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  6. Anonymous17/12/14 11:46 am

    WOW!!!!!!! you have amazing capital letters and full stops and everything your my favourite writer in the hole enterer universe I'm so great full to have a great writer in year 4 Jack.

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  7. Aadi17/12/14 1:00 pm

    Lovely work Joeseph

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  8. Jude17/12/14 1:02 pm

    Amazing writing Joseph out of 10 10/10!!!!!

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  9. George17/12/14 1:03 pm

    you have amazing vocabulary out of 10 10/10

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  10. Anonymous17/12/14 1:32 pm

    Joseph, this is a very powerful piece of writing which captures the mood of the war. Well done. (Mr Garratt)

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  11. Anonymous26/12/14 4:52 pm

    Well done Joseph this is brilliant writing, we're both so very proud of you, mum & dad x

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